Fictional Quintuplet Sibset
(LN Remington)
Hazel Matilda Kora
Robin Alexander Apollo
Jasmine Beatrice Daphne
Indigo Dominic Zephyr
Cherry Elizabeth Echo
Wdyt? Are they matched? Should I make any changes?
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LISTEN TO THE MUSTN'TS
- Shel Silverstein
Listen to the MUSTN'TS, child,
Listen to the DON'TS
Listen to the SHOULDN'TS
The IMPOSSIBLES, the WON'TS
Listen to the NEVER HAVES
Then listen close to me—
Anything can happen, child,
ANYTHING can be.
Hazel Matilda Kora
Robin Alexander Apollo
Jasmine Beatrice Daphne
Indigo Dominic Zephyr
Cherry Elizabeth Echo
Wdyt? Are they matched? Should I make any changes?
*
LISTEN TO THE MUSTN'TS
- Shel Silverstein
Listen to the MUSTN'TS, child,
Listen to the DON'TS
Listen to the SHOULDN'TS
The IMPOSSIBLES, the WON'TS
Listen to the NEVER HAVES
Then listen close to me—
Anything can happen, child,
ANYTHING can be.
Replies
I love Hazel Matilda & Robin Alexander.
Jasmine Beatrice Daphne is okay, but I would change either Daphne or Jasmine, so there won't be two flowers in one name.
I would exchange Indigo for Milo or something that meshes better with Robin. Cherry I would also change.
Hazel Matilda Kora
Robin Alexander Apollo
Jasmine Beatrice Rhea
Milo Dominic Zephyr
Daphne Elizabeth Echo
Jasmine Beatrice Daphne is okay, but I would change either Daphne or Jasmine, so there won't be two flowers in one name.
I would exchange Indigo for Milo or something that meshes better with Robin. Cherry I would also change.
Hazel Matilda Kora
Robin Alexander Apollo
Jasmine Beatrice Rhea
Milo Dominic Zephyr
Daphne Elizabeth Echo
I love Cherry!
I see where you're going with the 2nd mns, but Apollo, Zephyr and Echo don't match well with the other names in their set. Cherry Elizabeth Echo is particularly odd, with cherry and echo both being dictionary words. Robin Alexander is good, but Apollo is too remote from them. Indigo and Zephyr have the same problem as Cherry and Echo: in the real world they are too far removed from each other. Jasmine and Daphne are OK, just, because Daphne has a long history of use as a human name - longer than Jasmine, in fact. Maybe Daphne Beatrice Jasmine? Then you lose your 2nd mn = Greek theme, but I'd go further and have Dominic Indigo Zephyr too. If you keep Zephyr. But even if you don't, I prefer Dominic with the other fns. Indigo is too unisex.