Penna Mae - Penna means pencil and pen in Swedish, so to me it looks strange.
Mia Loren - I like this better.
Memphis Kirke -Yuck, nmsaa!
Rafaella Israel - Rafaella is OK, but Israel looks strange on a girl.
Briseis - cool!
Holiday Grace - Ickety ick, sounds like a resort!
Aurora Robinson - Aurora is fine, but is Robinson her middle name? In Sweden, all son-names are surnames, so as first- and middle names they sound awkward to me.
Wynter Aria - I like this, but I prefer the spelling Winter.