Critiquing writing style out of nowhere is really presumptuous, seems about equally as rude as walking up to a not-quite-acquaintance and diabtribing about their speech patterns...would seem especially weird/hypocritical after just criticizing someone else for being blunt and dismissive.
And the reasoning behind the "run back into the cracks" line was indecipherable; I have no idea why that was directed at Pelops.
Anyway, you're Sparrow, right? (if not, sorry for the mistake, but you sound like him). Welcome back to the opinions board, where people criticize *names*.
This message was edited 6/8/2021, 9:03 AM