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Not bad for your second one! Maybe you could make the order of the characteristics for the children a bit better (first the gender/ number of children, then the naming rules, etc.). And if there are six possible events, it would be better if there happens just one a year. Otherwise they repeat a bit much I think, and it takes soooo much time to make some years.

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so:

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DW: Kimberley Susan (Philipps) Hanks
Age: 26
Hair: blonde
Eyes: grey
Job: Biologist

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DH: Peregrine Dallas Hanks
Age: 27
Hair: black and curly
Eyes: black
Job: owns his own motorcycle garage

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This message was edited 1/8/2014, 1:38 PM