[Opinions] I give up
You don't seem to know anything about your charaters, just vague ideas about the world and races you have created. If you want to write you need to develop your charaters as individuals. Until you start doing that I don't think I can help you anymore.
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Daimin  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 9:33 AM
Re: Daimin  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 10:13 AM
Re: Daimin  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 10:23 AM
Re: Daimin  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 11:12 AM
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Re: Daimin  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 11:32 AM
Re: Daimin  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 11:37 AM
I give up  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 11:40 AM
Re: I give up  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 11:47 AM
Re: I give up  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 12:17 PM
Re: I give up  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 12:42 PM
Re: I give up  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 1:04 PM
Re: I give up  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 1:08 PM
Re: I give up  ·  BellamynSora  ·  8/4/2010, 1:33 PM
Re: I give up  ·  Míreth Aquaria  ·  8/4/2010, 1:59 PM
Take it to the writing board nt  ·  Sofia  ·  8/4/2010, 2:00 PM