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Help[Games] Re: Star Wars Writing Congrats Round 2! + Q & Note
in reply to a message by quigonjecca
Username: X Mar (sorry, I guess I forgot that part last round)
Last name: Quest
Your character: Veila Secura (18, Jedi Padawan) (née Cerulian)
Species: Twilek
Colours: Turqoise skin, Purple eyes
Lightsaber: Purple double bladed sabers, Juyo style
Strength: Sense Powers
Weakness: Force-Lightning
DH: Jacen Declann (24, Bounty Hunter)
Species: Twilek
Colours: Orange skin, Blue eyes
Numbers: 2 9
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I'm Veila, I'm 18 years old and one day I hope to be a Jedi Knight. I'm currently training, my Master is a human named Ryoo Daragon. I have no parents. My mother raised me, and she died when I was 8. I never knew my father. I'm very good at sensing, and I'm learning more things as well. My Master has given up trying to teach me Force Lightning, because we spent a long time on this already and I could never even produce the tiniest spark. He's teaching me mostly the Juyo fighting style, the style that is his favourite, and I learn easiest. My double bladed saber is the exact same shade of purple as my eyes.
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When I was with my master on a mission in Trantor, I met a greta Twilek man named Jacen. He's orange and has eyes of the deepest blue. He's tall, even for a Twilek. My Master was sent to Trantor to look for a witness in a polical assassination (a Cathar named Muk), but Jacen had found Muk first and had killed him. My Master was very upset that the witness was gone now, and insisted on questioning Jacen to find out any information that might be useful. Jacen didn't really know anything other than that he had been sent to kill Muk, and would get paid for doing that. He refused to give up the name of the one he worked for. My Master told me that was to be expected, because for a Bounty Hunter such as Jacen, giving up his employers name would seriously harm his reputation in his profession, and then it would be hard for him to get any work, since his reputation was all a Bounty Hunter really had. He let Jacen go and we planned to go back home.
Due to some trouble around Trantor, it wasn't very easy to get out of there and we were forced to stay there a week longer. My Master decided to visit a friend and told me to look after myself for a couple of hours. He told me I was not allowed to go outside of the hotel where we were staying. I as the good Padawan that I am, didn't set a foot outside. Inside, at the bar, I met Jacen again. We talked and I must say that he was quite charming. After talking for a while, he invited me to come to his room, so we would have a more private place to talk. Since it was still inside the hotel, I agreed to go there with him.
When we arrived at his room, I could feel the tension building between us. When he shut the door and walked over to me, I could hear my own heartbeat. As he touched my lekku, I felt a shiver go through me. He pulled me closer to him and kissed me. I was shocked at first, but then I kissed him back. He was so tall, strong and beautiful. He had long lekku that were covered in tattoos. About an hour and a half after I had come to his room, I fell asleep in his arms on his bed.
The next morning I awoke with a shock. I realised that my Master would have been back a long time already and that he was probably looking for me. And also probably very angry with me... I wanted to get up, but Jacen pulled me back and kissed me. I told him I couldn't stay and that I had to get back. He told me he'd come see me before I leave Trantor.
I went back to the room of my Master and he was there waiting for me. I endured a lecture on how irresponsible I'd been and he told me I couldn't leave the room until we left. I didn't tell him that I'd seen Jacen. Later he left the room and then Jacen came to see me. I told him to leave because I was afraid of what might happen if my Master would catch him here. He ignored what I said and walked over to kiss me again. I couldn't resist him.
When my Master came back he was still there. I saw the look on his face and got really scared. He turned to Jacen and said something to him in a language I didn't understand. Jacen spoke back to him and they got in to an argument. Before long, Jacen stormed out of the room slamming the door behind him. My Master only said "Pack your stuff, were leaving now". I did,and we left Trantor.
About six weeks later I realised I was pregnant. I considered not telling my Master, but there was no way a Padawan could ever keep a secret like that from her Master, so I told him. He didn't say anything and wlaked away. I broke down crying, thinking that he had decided to give up on teaching me altogether. INstead he came back an hour later announcing that Jacen was on his way here, because he needed to be involved in this. He explained to me, that a Jedi cannot be pregnant and can never be in a lifelong love relationship. He also said he was very disappointed in me. He said that after talking with Jacen and me tomorrow after he arrived, he would have to ask the council if he would be allowed to teach me any further. I was relieved that he still had the intention of teaching me, but I was very afriad that the council wouldn't allow that to happen.
Jacen came the next day and we decided to get married and let the baby come. My Master went to the council and was allowed to teach me. Jacen told me that according to sources he had, he had been forced to make a great sacrifice to be allowed to do this, but he didn't know what it was that he had given up exactly. I resolved to be a very good student from now on, because that would be the only way I could possibly repay him. Jacen went on his way again, because he had work to do. It was probably the way our marriage would be form then on, I would lead a Jedi life and he would lead a Bounty hunter life, and we would only see each other sporadically.
+ Question: I've saved the namebank on my computer and am eliminating the names I use and alphabeting the list to make it easier for me. So is it okay to use this list, or will the namebank change?
+ Note: I will be doing some travelling again for the next two weeks, so I'm not sure if when I'm goign to be able to be online, since I'll be dependant on internet cafés from now on
Last name: Quest
Your character: Veila Secura (18, Jedi Padawan) (née Cerulian)
Species: Twilek
Colours: Turqoise skin, Purple eyes
Lightsaber: Purple double bladed sabers, Juyo style
Strength: Sense Powers
Weakness: Force-Lightning
DH: Jacen Declann (24, Bounty Hunter)
Species: Twilek
Colours: Orange skin, Blue eyes
Numbers: 2 9
*
I'm Veila, I'm 18 years old and one day I hope to be a Jedi Knight. I'm currently training, my Master is a human named Ryoo Daragon. I have no parents. My mother raised me, and she died when I was 8. I never knew my father. I'm very good at sensing, and I'm learning more things as well. My Master has given up trying to teach me Force Lightning, because we spent a long time on this already and I could never even produce the tiniest spark. He's teaching me mostly the Juyo fighting style, the style that is his favourite, and I learn easiest. My double bladed saber is the exact same shade of purple as my eyes.
*
When I was with my master on a mission in Trantor, I met a greta Twilek man named Jacen. He's orange and has eyes of the deepest blue. He's tall, even for a Twilek. My Master was sent to Trantor to look for a witness in a polical assassination (a Cathar named Muk), but Jacen had found Muk first and had killed him. My Master was very upset that the witness was gone now, and insisted on questioning Jacen to find out any information that might be useful. Jacen didn't really know anything other than that he had been sent to kill Muk, and would get paid for doing that. He refused to give up the name of the one he worked for. My Master told me that was to be expected, because for a Bounty Hunter such as Jacen, giving up his employers name would seriously harm his reputation in his profession, and then it would be hard for him to get any work, since his reputation was all a Bounty Hunter really had. He let Jacen go and we planned to go back home.
Due to some trouble around Trantor, it wasn't very easy to get out of there and we were forced to stay there a week longer. My Master decided to visit a friend and told me to look after myself for a couple of hours. He told me I was not allowed to go outside of the hotel where we were staying. I as the good Padawan that I am, didn't set a foot outside. Inside, at the bar, I met Jacen again. We talked and I must say that he was quite charming. After talking for a while, he invited me to come to his room, so we would have a more private place to talk. Since it was still inside the hotel, I agreed to go there with him.
When we arrived at his room, I could feel the tension building between us. When he shut the door and walked over to me, I could hear my own heartbeat. As he touched my lekku, I felt a shiver go through me. He pulled me closer to him and kissed me. I was shocked at first, but then I kissed him back. He was so tall, strong and beautiful. He had long lekku that were covered in tattoos. About an hour and a half after I had come to his room, I fell asleep in his arms on his bed.
The next morning I awoke with a shock. I realised that my Master would have been back a long time already and that he was probably looking for me. And also probably very angry with me... I wanted to get up, but Jacen pulled me back and kissed me. I told him I couldn't stay and that I had to get back. He told me he'd come see me before I leave Trantor.
I went back to the room of my Master and he was there waiting for me. I endured a lecture on how irresponsible I'd been and he told me I couldn't leave the room until we left. I didn't tell him that I'd seen Jacen. Later he left the room and then Jacen came to see me. I told him to leave because I was afraid of what might happen if my Master would catch him here. He ignored what I said and walked over to kiss me again. I couldn't resist him.
When my Master came back he was still there. I saw the look on his face and got really scared. He turned to Jacen and said something to him in a language I didn't understand. Jacen spoke back to him and they got in to an argument. Before long, Jacen stormed out of the room slamming the door behind him. My Master only said "Pack your stuff, were leaving now". I did,and we left Trantor.
About six weeks later I realised I was pregnant. I considered not telling my Master, but there was no way a Padawan could ever keep a secret like that from her Master, so I told him. He didn't say anything and wlaked away. I broke down crying, thinking that he had decided to give up on teaching me altogether. INstead he came back an hour later announcing that Jacen was on his way here, because he needed to be involved in this. He explained to me, that a Jedi cannot be pregnant and can never be in a lifelong love relationship. He also said he was very disappointed in me. He said that after talking with Jacen and me tomorrow after he arrived, he would have to ask the council if he would be allowed to teach me any further. I was relieved that he still had the intention of teaching me, but I was very afriad that the council wouldn't allow that to happen.
Jacen came the next day and we decided to get married and let the baby come. My Master went to the council and was allowed to teach me. Jacen told me that according to sources he had, he had been forced to make a great sacrifice to be allowed to do this, but he didn't know what it was that he had given up exactly. I resolved to be a very good student from now on, because that would be the only way I could possibly repay him. Jacen went on his way again, because he had work to do. It was probably the way our marriage would be form then on, I would lead a Jedi life and he would lead a Bounty hunter life, and we would only see each other sporadically.
+ Question: I've saved the namebank on my computer and am eliminating the names I use and alphabeting the list to make it easier for me. So is it okay to use this list, or will the namebank change?
+ Note: I will be doing some travelling again for the next two weeks, so I'm not sure if when I'm goign to be able to be online, since I'll be dependant on internet cafés from now on
This message was edited 12/29/2007, 11:47 PM
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