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HelpThis is a little disorganized...
in reply to a message by NameFreek
It's hard to understand. If it's no trouble, could you fix it please? Thank you.
Sherlock: Alone is what I have. Alone protects me.
John: No. Friends protect people.
~BBC's Sherlock
Sherlock: Alone is what I have. Alone protects me.
John: No. Friends protect people.
~BBC's Sherlock
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Its my first so tell me how I could reorganize it?? Thanks for feedback.!
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I think your post isn't disorganized as much as it is un-formatted.
My first suggestion would be to add some strategic spacing in your post. Things are much easier to read when there is some space for our eyes to realize you're going on to a new topic. You might also want to think about putting some of your headers in bold print so that they stand out when we are reading.
As far as the content of the post itself, it would be helpful if you provide a link to the dice to use--I don't have it off the top of my head, but there is a common one that we typically use. Most of us don't have 12-sided dice just lying around the house (at least, I don't).
Also, could you go back through and make sure all the information you wanted got transferred over when you posted? I was reading and got lost a few times when there seemed to be "gaps" in the information (such as what to do if we rolled a certain number, like "1").
Third--we like getting naming rules (this is a name site, after all); however, could you make your naming section a little clearer? I wasn't sure what was meant by the various lists you had under the naming rules.
Hopefully this is clear and helpful for you. And, for anyone else reading, please correct me if I am wrong in anything I insinuated by use of the word "we". I wouldn't want to misrepresent anyone.
Happy gaming!
estel
My first suggestion would be to add some strategic spacing in your post. Things are much easier to read when there is some space for our eyes to realize you're going on to a new topic. You might also want to think about putting some of your headers in bold print so that they stand out when we are reading.
As far as the content of the post itself, it would be helpful if you provide a link to the dice to use--I don't have it off the top of my head, but there is a common one that we typically use. Most of us don't have 12-sided dice just lying around the house (at least, I don't).
Also, could you go back through and make sure all the information you wanted got transferred over when you posted? I was reading and got lost a few times when there seemed to be "gaps" in the information (such as what to do if we rolled a certain number, like "1").
Third--we like getting naming rules (this is a name site, after all); however, could you make your naming section a little clearer? I wasn't sure what was meant by the various lists you had under the naming rules.
Hopefully this is clear and helpful for you. And, for anyone else reading, please correct me if I am wrong in anything I insinuated by use of the word "we". I wouldn't want to misrepresent anyone.
Happy gaming!
estel
This message was edited 1/6/2014, 3:28 PM
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You can't roll 1 with two dice but thanks!! Great advice estel
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You can't roll 1 with two dice but thanks!! Great advice estel
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Youl roll dice and whatever n number you get is the event you get roll the dice for details and just create a family and their life story for however many years.
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