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Re: Continue the Story Congrats Round 7
UN: Meralissa
Story: The Goose Girl
DH: King Mathias Ignatius Bryant (37)
DW: Queen Alodia Rosamund Estelle (35)
DD: Crown Princess Anneliese Matilde Regula Rosemarie (16)
-DF: Lord Lugus Octavian Seward of Dragons
DD: Princess Iliana Astraea Henrietta Elisabeth (13)
DD: Princess Evangeline Felicitas Joanna Hope (10)
DS: Prince Lysander Falada Alaric Prosper (8)
DS/DD: Prince Thomas Sterling Pyrrhus Sage \ Princess Linnea Estella Garnet Lavender (3)
DD: Princess Merilynn Chamomile Lisette Undine (1)
DS/DS: Prince Claudius Evander Phillip Bion \ Prince Cassius Leander Paramonos MarcelOn the eve of the new year Alodia claimed to have a vision,a fairy claiming trouble was near. Her family was bewildered, was there to be trouble or was it just a nightmare? They increased there troops none the less and watched there border carefully. Then it happened.
Anneliese had been riding her horse Noemi on day when she her a twig snap. Sure many twigs snapped but this was and unusual snap. It resounded, reverberating of the trees. Anneliese went to investigate and found a boy, appearing no elder than she. Suspicious, she ask what he had done. She found he was an apprentice Wizard, but his master had been imprisoned by a dragon. So he had teleported to safety. Anneliese pryed more into the boy (his name was Erebos Sarasun) and found the dragon was to attack the castle. She ask if she could go to the dragon (She was sure she could convince it to save her family) so Erebos teleported her to the 'dragons cave'. In reality the 'Wizard' was a Necromancer who had captured the dragon, and now she herself. Erebos had tricked her. Anneliese knew this couldn't be good, a Crown Princess could gather a lot of ransom, the possesses could gain much sway in turn for her safety. {I'm switching to Anneliese's POV now, It is way to had to write in this summery voice}"What are you going to do with me?"
The Necromancer looked up at her,
"You see that dragon?" Anneliese nodded, "It's going to kill you." Her eyes widened with fright, "Then I'm going to 'minionize' you."
"But..."
"Little Princess, I take no chances. If you weren't dead I couldn't control you. If I couldn't control you, you'd get away."
"Why have the dragon kill me?"
"The magical energy's would be more potent." The Necromancer explained with a sinister smile. "Might as well begain now," And with a yelp Anneliese was shoved in with the dragon. "Kill her." He order.
Anneliese had heard many stories of dragon, all of them were furious beasts that killed. This dragon wasn't like that.
"Why?" The dragon ask.
"I command you!"
"Really? You claim to command a dragon? You have much to learn dead boy."
The sorcerer of the dead went as white as a specter.
"But I capture you!" He protested.
"And I got you!" Anneliese shouted, grabbing his neck and holding a knife to his belly. A Dragon cage might hold a dragon, but as skinny a corseted 16 year old cage, it was way to easy to slip out while the Necromancer was distracted. "Move and die!"
"You? A sheltered little princess? You couldn't-"
The 'sheltered little princess' hit him on the head, knocking him out.
"With two little brothers you sorta pick things up." She explained. Looking Erebos in the eye she gestured for him to run. Spying her knife he abaid. "Now what to do with the dragon." she muttered.
"You could set me free. On my honor I won't do anything."
"A dragons honor?"
"I didn't eat you."
"I guess... but there isn't a dragon sized door! Its welded shut."
The dragon made a face,
"I didn't want to do this, but..." suddenly the dragon shrank and changed shape to a 17 year old handsome looking boy with red hair and green eyes. "Could ya' open the door? Thanks." He said.
"What..."
"Its permanent to." The former dragon sighed. "but atleast I'm out of there, in good company."
Anneliese smiled a little.
"I mean," The dragon continued, "Its not everyday a dragon gets saved by a beautiful maiden."
"Whats your name?"
"Lugus Seward. Lord Lugus Seward of dragons"...After Anneliese's adventure she engaged became engaged to a certain former dragon....Claudius and Cassius were born under the sign of the trickster much woe to their parents. Even right after they were born they were rambunctious! They are going to be such a handful! The twins are identical and are lookalikes of their father, dark hair, green eyes. Anneliese, Iliana, Evangeline, Lysander, Thomas, Linnea, Merilynn, Claudius, and Cassius
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Brownie points......for the pretty impressive story, more detailed than I've ever seen in a congrats game. Is this from something you're writing, a story or something?
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no, I just felt inspired :) , I like writing. So thanks for the brownie points!
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