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I know it gets a bit confusing but you did it mostly right and I've fixed the format of your family so it reads like the other player's families. So your family looks like this:

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Username: MThenard
House/Estate: Northcote Manor
Career/Position: Earl of Northcote
LN: Payne
DH: Lord William Percival Charles
DW: Lady Josephine Cecilia Anne née Hodges
DS: Lord Fredrick Thomas Henry (Heir to Northcote)
---DW: Lady Augusta Susan née ?
DD: Lady Honoria Ruby Jane Payne
---DH: Captain Percival George Cavendish (Navy Captain, Southerton Grange)
DD: Lady Rosamund Kate Charlotte Payne
---DH: Dr. Ebenezer Henry John "Jack" Schuyler (Doctor, Randalls Park)

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The only thing that you could posibly change would be to give Lady Augusta Susan a maiden name. Other than that I've fixed all of your titles which were mostly correct so you're all ready for the next round! :)

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