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Help[Opinions] Re: I give up
in reply to a message by BellamynSora
Leilani is talkitive. She does not like seafood because they might be her family. She has seen some of her mortal friends die. She home-life style is she swims and takes care of her children.
This message was edited 8/4/2010, 12:42 PM
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Home-life generally refers to a person's family condition. So, does your charater come from a broken home? Did she have loving parents? What kind of a mother is she now? Did she enjoy her growing up years and try to replicate that experience for her own children or does she try to give her kids a better life than she had.
I'm honestly trying to help you but I'm not sure you're "getting it".
I'm honestly trying to help you but I'm not sure you're "getting it".
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No, she did not come from a broken home. She had loving parents. She is a caring mom but furm in a good way. Yes, she had a good life and yes, to be loving and caring people. Leilani's life was good except for her friends that died. She always cried from that. When Leilani is mad or angry her hair becomes red.
This message was edited 8/4/2010, 1:28 PM
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You don't have to tell me the answers to all these questions. I'm just trying to help you develop your characters.
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Okay. Thanks.
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Take it to the writing board
Take it to the writing board nt
Take it to the writing board nt
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