I think I would be pronouncing it as you do. To look at,
Seren looks like a typo of
serene, and I don't find it very feminine or pretty. Sorry. I do like
Alice, but I don't think it flows with
Seren. I would suggest
Seren Jade.
And, I, too, am not good at writing out pronunciations...so don't feel bad. :)
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Lissa Hannah-
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