I LOVED your story!!
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I wondered how people would go about leaving what I essentially left at mid-plot, and you've wrapped it up so wonderfully (and funny too!).
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Thanks! I'd kind of envisioned the fiancee as this slightly creepy, shadowy girl when I named her (and her land), but when your writing prompt gave her a chance to turn out truly evil, she just went all Hello Kitty on me. I think those G-Force movie posters are haunting my subconscious. (The guinea pig mound is straight from the Lansing, Michigan Zoo, by the way. Not sure if it's still there or not.) :) It was a lot of fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it.