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Your character names are generally very strong and well-chosen for the cultural backgrounds they suggest. The names feel authentic, which helps immerse readers in the world you're creating. You've done a good job balancing common names with less typical ones, giving your characters a sense of individuality while maintaining a cohesive cultural tone.

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The variety of diminutives also adds a layer of intimacy and realism to the relationships, making the characters feel more human.

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If there’s one thing I’d suggest considering, it might be the balance of the names in terms of how easy they are to remember or pronounce for your intended audience. Some of the surnames and diminutives are relatively uncommon or might be harder for non-native speakers to handle, but that’s just a small concern and can add to the richness of the story.

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Overall, I think the names are well-suited for your characters and the world you're building!