Re: Is it too much
in reply to a message by H3lp
Well, most people end up with gray hair no matter what their last or first name is.
But in a story, it seems a bit silly to do that, especially if you make a point of introducing them and then saying about the gray hair. It's as hokey as introducing a character and mentioning that her name is Harper and she plays the harp.
Before you criticize a man, walk a mile in his shoes. That way, when you criticize him, you're a mile away and you have his shoes!
Steve Martin
But in a story, it seems a bit silly to do that, especially if you make a point of introducing them and then saying about the gray hair. It's as hokey as introducing a character and mentioning that her name is Harper and she plays the harp.
Before you criticize a man, walk a mile in his shoes. That way, when you criticize him, you're a mile away and you have his shoes!
Steve Martin