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[Opinions] Thoughts?
I made this sibling group for characters in my book(and would use in real life). Do you think it’s good?Helen
Charlotte
James
Evan

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I think they go very well together. They all sound classic and soft, but still with personality.
I think Evan stands out, doesn't match the others
Favorite boy name here: Evan. James is nice in sound and imagery, but tired.
Favorite girl name here: Charlotte. I don't like the sound of Helen at all.As a sibset, the names suit each other all except for Evan. I recommend Edward instead because it's been around for about as long as the other names.

This message was edited 4/21/2024, 11:40 AM

Evan stands out. What about Edgar?
pretty good, very modern british
Helen and Evan are too matchy in sound for my liking.Maybe Owen?
I love Owen! Thank you
James, Charlotte and Helen are well matched as they are all classic and traditional names. For me, Evan is the odd one out and even though it's Welsh for John, it "sounds" younger than the other three. I guess John itself is not an option as you have already have a James for one of the siblings.Have you considered another traditional name like Edward, Peter, George, Lucas, Robert, William, David, Patrick, Victor, Michael, Alexander or Richard?

This message was edited 4/21/2024, 11:06 AM

I think that they compliment each other wonderfully!
Yeah, they all seem pretty vintage.
Well, it depends on what time period your characters are from. I can see Charlotte, James and Evan as young kids today, but not Helen so much. And if they're old folks, Evan is the one that stands out.